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I hope you all enjoyed the long weekend, I sure did… maybe a little too much, hence the late update.
but don’t worry, I have been busy with it.

Brendan replied to the fill in the gaps and did it better than I could possibly fathom!
If you guys didn’t read it, you might want to go back and check it out!

The idea was about a Phoenix who was setting the earth on fire and got help from an abominable snowman. The phoenix said thanks by lighting up the clouds with the pink orange color.    
Great job! Seriously. That could be a Disney movie. It actually inspired me to write lyrics on the spot! Originally I wanted to mix all the stories together.. but obviously that was an insane idea…I don’t know how that could have worked. I hope you guys don’t mind.

So the mission for you guys, is to read the lyrics below and make your comments, what do you like, what do you not like. Pick it apart and suggest edits. I would really like to know what you think of this first draft. ALSO WE NEED A TITLE!

 

EDITED: 13th of  June

cracked from an egg on the ground,
little bird didnt know how to fly
with no one around,
he relied on himself, to just get by

and when the sun goes down,
his light, starts to shine.
when the darks around,
he started to glow,
just to kill time.

When he was all grown up he, bacame quite sad,
the light in his heart, set fire
to the sea and the land.

everything he touched he, turned to flame.
was tired of being so lonley
and full of shame

I want to be, some place away from me.
and i dont know why, God is doing this to me.

——
rolled from a ball in the snow,
little monkey was really cold,
and with no place to go.
he built an igloe.

and when the sun went down.
monkey saw a faint glow,
in a land far far away,
from what he called his home..

I want to be, some place away from me.
and i dont know why, I have to be so lonely
——-

the monkey decided to go to the glow,
saw every thing on fire,
and put it out with his snow.

he saw a big bird, who was really sad.
and said, whats the matter with you bird.
your life cant be that bad.

bird, turned around and said you dont understand.
Im the one who set fire to everything in this land.

monkey knew what to do, and said “Bird follow me”.
I’ll take you to a place far above the trees.

and as they made their way to the mountain top,
they became best friends and the talking didnt stop.

——–
up on the cliff monkey said this might get rough,
and as the bird turned around, monkey pushed him
right off.

and as bird spiraled down, he was quite angry.
as he flapped his fire wings,
he began to feel free

i know now, who i was meant to be,
and i light up the clouds for snow monkey.

when your in trouble look towards the sky
and remember that there is always a snow monkey near by

 

All right thats it for now. Quite a long song eh?

Once again feel free to email me at music(at)adamhoek(dot)com if you feel the need.

I’m going to start working on the music.

-Adam

Hey you creative people!

I know your dying to get creating so lets get right to it shall we!
This mission is by far going to be the most fun!
the mission is below the video

From last week you guys chose track 1!
A little funky, a little smooth. I thought it was going to be track 3 but hey…Its your song too so track 1 it is!
here it is again so you can hear it.

So the next part is for us to build the story! Ive set you up something to work from.
All you have to do is fill in the gaps! Pretty easy, and fun too…kind of like a game show.

So get crazy and fill the gaps in, in the comments below. If you think you know where the story should go after what Ive written up, go for it! Be as creative as possible. The more rediculous the better!

what we are going to do is get all your stories together and combine them! Take the strong elements from each one and make a master story we can all be proud of!

Tip: Feel free to use animals as characters, or objects even!
the main character is x and the 2nd character is y.

Once apon a time there was a _________(x) who didnt know how to ______________________.
they were very sad about it. One day whilst__________________, x came upon a ___________________(y)
who was very_________________.

x and y upon meeting imediatly ________________. x liked y but didnt feel that they were trustworthy.
y said ‘I think i can help you with your problem’. x replied “____________________”.

A little shocked y replied “__________________”

X agreed to recieve y’s help, but little did x know that y was ___________________.

Where should it go from here?!
Also make sure to read what others are saying in the comments and make suggestions off of their creative stories!